Luscious lashes, lips, and red gashes,
I am no longer your prisoner.
I wish I hadn't the power to taste;
the poison of your lips
leaves me wanting more.
If you were a star brightly shining in the night sky...
the heavens would duplicate you among the darkness.
By moonlight we glide
upon sensual bliss,
all of our worries put aside.
In a lifetime, we make memories.
For a lifetime, we won't forget.
Hand prints on the back window.
You smile, but you know they are there.
The darkened realm
is a tempting invocation
when the world around you
is already starless.
A fresh canvas to forge emotions, and display fake smiles.
Colors that will sell to others and convince myself.
My heart has released my lips
and I speak the truth,
and even though it hurts inside,
a broken heart beats on.
What is sunshine,
without the rain?
I breathe in, feeling the wonderful things of life
fill my lungs, and pump through my veins.
For something beautiful left its traces behind
on something that was so gray.
and I drink away my thoughts of you
recently locked away in bedroom drawers.
I am no longer your prisoner.
I wish I hadn't the power to taste;
the poison of your lips
leaves me wanting more.
If you were a star brightly shining in the night sky...
the heavens would duplicate you among the darkness.
By moonlight we glide
upon sensual bliss,
all of our worries put aside.
In a lifetime, we make memories.
For a lifetime, we won't forget.
Hand prints on the back window.
You smile, but you know they are there.
The darkened realm
is a tempting invocation
when the world around you
is already starless.
A fresh canvas to forge emotions, and display fake smiles.
Colors that will sell to others and convince myself.
My heart has released my lips
and I speak the truth,
and even though it hurts inside,
a broken heart beats on.
What is sunshine,
without the rain?
I breathe in, feeling the wonderful things of life
fill my lungs, and pump through my veins.
For something beautiful left its traces behind
on something that was so gray.
and I drink away my thoughts of you
recently locked away in bedroom drawers.
Author notes
This was a lot of fun, I tried to put it together so it sort of made sense. I enjoyed going through old poetry of mine to create this! umm there are so many poems in this I do not remember all of them. But some of them are:
Red Gashes
If you...
(((I Hate You))
A Broken Heart Beats On
Today
Incoherent Thoughts
A contest entry
- Your Best Lines by Danna Hobart.
390 points, ended October 19, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Underappreciated Centos (PW’s ONLY) by Paloszoo.
1000 points, ended December 9, 2009, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Be Honest
Comments
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Blessings~
Oh My~ Love the way You weaved this
which made sense~ and took the Reader
there~
Adore the Alliteration~
Excellent!
Congratulations on Your Trophy
Woot~
Yay!! 

Keep that quill & Mind dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent

Best wishes in all You do~
with love & light~ Desire~*~


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Oh, this is great! The lines have compiled a nice cento. I particularly liked:
A fresh canvas to forge emotions, and display fake smiles.
Colors that will sell to others and convince myself.
Way to go on this lovely piece! Thanks for entering my cento contest! It was a pleasure to read your work!
Kim


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i love this poem so much baby. is this the one that is being put on the front cover? I'm so proud of u an i miss u like crazy!
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If you were a star brightly shining in the night sky...
the heavens would duplicate you among the darkness...
This line I find delicious.
The darkened realm
is a tempting invocation
when the world around you
is already starless.
And this stanza is quite profound.
I am glad you had fun putting these together. It was a very enjoyable read.
Thank you for entering.




