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one mistake

one mistake
one night we forgot about everything
one mistake changed our lives
one night we went from 2 to 3
one mistake and we have to grow up now
one night and we are not just 16 and 19 anymore
one mistake is all it took
one night of forgetfulness
and we created a miracle

so what did u think

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  • Blood Storm
    November 23, 2008
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    its so funny ans sad how fast life can go. don't you think?


  • A m b r e a
    October 6, 2008

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    A very big life changing event! It's a little repetitive but I like the tone. A couple things
    Created not craeted and miracle not mircle.
    Small mistakes, no big deal!
    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!!