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free-fall.


`

closing my eyes
in mid-flight

with nothing but air
between my ears

and sound in my fall

i breathe you.

`

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  • transit
    October 6, 2008

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    ooo

    Love the feelings are the imagery. This played like a scene from a movie. The font colour is great too. keep penning! I like the abstractness of this poem too.

    transit