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Dancing Bloom

Dance away, Dance away
my darling child,
set the floor a bloom,
through delicate gestures
let creative mind flow,
waters soft trickle
falls graceful flutter
on stages so grand.
Curtains open to minds,
sad to happy,
simple to mysterious,
gather the applauds
in artistic frames,
dance away, dance away
my child to womanhood
a world to flourish,
she's a lavished fairy on air
with audience in twinkling dust,
always giving of her finest
dance away to all.


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Kathleen

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  • Florida Sunshine
    October 7, 2008
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    You have a classic poet feel to your poetry. ~ The images you placed gives of the innocent sparkle of the youth -> adulthood. ~ Two simple sentence creating a unique piece of work.

    Thank you so much for sharing this with me, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

    Best of luck you,
    Florida Sunshine