Hair down and eyes shining,
A beautiful smile you
Won’t be denying, no lying.
And it must be lovely,
Because you keep on staring,
But you’re not caring,
And that’s why she isn’t sharing
That beautiful mind of hers
Or those wonderful, undeniable kisses.
You can’t make her blush,
Like I can, you see?
So, why don’t you just hush
And let her be?
She didn’t do anything to you,
Because that isn’t her way,
Because you don’t stay,
You don’t understand her that way,
But if you would just shut up,
You could possibly find out today.
Most can’t see it,
After all, they’re blind.
Doing what she wants to,
Day after day, independent,
Isn’t that a wonderful thing,
Showing everyday that she is strong?
None of this is wrong,
And it shall last forever, long.
Author notes
This is a poem I wrote about the user on here who goes by the name of prettyrainboweyes... and her real name is Maddie. I hope she loves this and knows it's all from the heart.
Just honest opinions, yeah? Uh-huh!
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You can’t make her blush,
Like I can, you see?
So, why don’t you just hush
And let her be?
She didn’t do anything to you,
Because that isn’t her way,
Because you don’t stay,
You don’t understand her that way,
But if you would just shut up,
You could possibly find out today.
Awe thats so sweet that you wrote this about someone on this site, i've had a few written about me from some great friends on here, and I love them. I'm sure she loved this too.
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This is a sweet little poem. Lovely .
I particularly enjoyed the first stanza. Keep it up
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wow this is really good. thanks yeah of coarse I love it its quite brillant.
I'd have to agree its mad poem LOL. colour is right ... though beautiful well written. I like it much.
rainbow-.-
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madness
OMG THIS IS A MAD POEM GREAT RYHMING KEEP WRITING!!!!
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