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Refugee

Missing image
deserted journey in a car,
walked into peaceful desert
where there is no stake
to fight and plunder.

sands offer large space
to stride and contemplate on world
ruined cities echoing gun shots
keep life on edge,
survivors fighting like rats for morsel of bread.

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  • penman gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    a wonderful poem dad good luck in the contest