There is nothing left
when you fail to see
the reasons for life
our mortality
things are never as good
as they used to be
or as they should be
not for you
and not for me
I can't help
but to feel your pain
but to wallow in self pity
will only prolong the suffering
your better than this
you, are a writer
you have a power
a power few obtain
through your work
you can change the world
you know this
and as a fellow writer
I do too
for all who know
the pen is mightier
a path to righteousness
shall be made
Author notes
On a scale of one to crazy, I'm penguin
A contest entry
- EGO BOOST TIME!! by White Tail.
1800 points, ended January 1, 18 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful darkness that grabs you in this deep, dark poem full to the brim with passion and depth.
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i think this is really good :] i like it.
the pen is mightier fo sho..lol
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