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Meticulos Job

thieves signal each other
when last lights off,
they studied thoroughly in's and out's
waited for opportune moment,
to rob and run away with booty.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    unusual take on the prompt, it certainly wasn't what I was expecting. clever thinking and well stated.


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    a brilliant poem dad good luck in the contest