Here I stand
In perfect form
Waiting
Just for you
Look at me
Watch me
Every move
That I make
Is calculated
Precise
to the point
to catch
only your eye
Like a puppet
On strings
I have
Nothing
in my head
Just thoughts
of you
and I
together
With
NO
strings
Attached
Well almost
Author notes
I Used Picture Number 3: My Woman
Umm A twin maybe? lol
A contest entry
- Wanted: More AP family members by Iridessa MoonFlower.
600 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So?
Comments
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This was really well. I enjoyed your work. Thank you for entering this contest. Good luck. Yes I would like it for you to be my twin! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Nice Poem That you Have Written !
You have a nice discription here ! Letting everyone know whom as well as what you are looking at and for !You have showed action here as you have written about # 3 My woman. Which I feel that you have expressed well.My favorite part of this poem is: Precise to the point, to catch only your eye. As well as just thoughts of you and I together ! Blessings be To You Alway's ! Brenda Gae ! And I fell that it is nice to at least committe on 2 other poems in each contest that we enter, for it show's respect to the other Contest particapents , just my opinion though !!!!!!!
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