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4 Haiku's

Crisp wind blowing through,
shaking leaves of all colors
to the layered ground.

Crunchy snow beneath
my feet, as I travel on,
seeking warmth of home.

Buds of flowers rise,
seeking solace from the sun.
Stretching peacefully.

Dogwoods of bright white,
jump out from behind walls of
every shade of green.

Author notes

I just saw the contest and wanted to try it out. Bet you can't guess which season go's with which haiku.

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  • AssumingRain
    November 9, 2008
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    very interesting and I enjoyed a lot.It tells of all the seasons...


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    WOW- all four are realy good very descriptive of each season. THE FIRST LINE OF EACH ONE IS VERY IMPRESIVE
    THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRIES AND GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
    ED.