Breaking Free

Meet me at the stroke of twelve.
We'll have a midnight wedding,
witnessed by the moon and stars.
Don't hesitate- the night is ours
to break free from past scars.

Author notes

10.05.08
Vaughn.

Prompt:
midnight rendezvous

A contest entry

5 Lines Of Wonder by Errant Panther. 460 points, ended October 17, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
To all those rejected poems!!! Come and Take Refuge!!! by No longer in use. 600 points, ended October 21, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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No longer in use
October 17, 2008
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Very well done. It's a nice read. Excellent write. Wonderful as it is beautiful.
Errant Panther
October 17, 2008

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nothing like a whistful, carefree nighttime decision to break the shackles of a painful past. well done.
Beautiful-N-Broken
October 16, 2008

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Oh I love this it is so sweet. Short and to the point and one of the best writes I've read all day! Good luck in your contest!!
Loveandblessings2u
October 5, 2008

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this is so sweet and tender.
very loving words.
a wonderful delight to read.
good luck in the contest.

loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce