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If only you knew

I die.
I live.
I cut.
I scream.
I look around these four walls,
Waiting to be see.
If tomorrow I were to die.
Would it matter at all?
Would the note my hand stained with blood be read?
Would you listen to the words?
Would you shed a tear?
Just one at all?
Would you finally understand,
you drove me to this all?

I mean nothing to you.
Nothing to the world.
I'm someone never seen.
Someone that would never be missed.
Im no one at all.

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  • Dark and Shallow
    October 6, 2008
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    wow. that's amazing.


  • waiting4the.real.me
    October 6, 2008

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    uve written a poem that i can really relate 2 its sounds excactly like wat im goin through right now thx 4 postin


  • Mgreen
    October 5, 2008
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    sad and strong, wow


  • perfectdarkangel
    October 5, 2008

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    so few lines yet so powerful, I love this peice, I could go on about how you are saying so much with such few words. its very emotional, and very well penned. wish you luck in the contest

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