raindrops on flagstone
what is leaking from liver
when hand was supposed to be sunny
as holding children
switched
squats raise palms as leaves gliding down
in autumn birth
you're called mother puppy
how could I not breathe for your name..
daughter's pet filters feelings --
by foyer for my fever of odor:
becomes a door when I heal to not bring weather in
cycled crack
but welcome my own new baby
emitting spot check
rock solid not slick
a car goes by in the calm
of vague chill following short downpour
and its splash of glistening reverberates it
similar to refreshed focus of miscarriage in surroundings
blurring abx isn't abc
and mouse goes under machine to wash away scream
Author notes
last stanza?
ooh my toe on grass
would you suggest something else or I get you over here
it's a land big enough to dance
until you don't come or I don't check choreographed way
of scythe slither of succulence
A contest entry
- here comes the rain again by Dienush.
500 points, ended October 23, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
good luck isn't my fixer; unnatural emoticons off list too including no applause symbol...
Comments
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This is unique. I enjoyed your word plays and rhymes. The first stanza was brilliant with how it compared weather to the human body. Very clever. Thank you for entering my contest.
~Diana
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Diana thanks for noticing
I so appreciate your raised eyebrows and the smile which compounds mine, not tart with subject once popping overlapping. I was happiest by it then.
I was excited to give effort for your contest but I've shied away from mindedness for page applause symbols that can't be paged lol,
called Carolyn
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