I see a huge climbing tree
with love inscribed on wood,
carved initials in a heart
where true love surely stood.
Sweethearts decorate that tree
with promises so true,
in a way it says to me,
"I have sweet love for you."
I look at the love on that tree
and admire those who share,
of all the markings on the tree
the sign of a heart is there.
This special tree stands alone
after the carvers pass away,
there is left the etchings
of the love they showed that day.
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy 13 by daviscth.
800 points, ended October 26, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a beautiful poem and the imagery is especially vivid. I always smile when I come across a heart with names or initials inside it. Thanks for posting in my contest.
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Thank You For Entering
Well this is just a very beeautifully penned poem and I love the depth flow and integrity of the poem. its swetly penned and its plain and simple but about a tree and I like how you show such love to a sweet tree that has significent meaning. anyways good work and good luck
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