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Musical Lullaby

Musical lullaby ends in broken keys,
Heart lays wrapped up in black lace.
Your mark displayed over pale body,
Your words recorded within disturbed mind.

Soul crawls - clinging to a taste,
Flavor of violence so sweet and pure.
Bones shatter, then heal to be shattered again.
A craving for the pain caused by you.

Clawing through dried-up scarlet blood,
Begging and pleading for a little more.
Unwrapping heart - offering for pain.
Musical lullaby plays distortion again.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 5, 2008

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    Thank You For Entering

    Well I must say this was quite an impressive write you have penned here for my contest. good flow rhythm depth and good choice of wording makes this a nice fit for my contest. I like how you use music in a dark way but a god penned way. anyw ays good work and good luck