i open my eyes for the very firs time and you promise me that i will never close them with out you being the last person i will see.
i grow up with big dream and little dreams coming true and being crushed and yet you promised me that i can still make them come true.
i promise to you the first time you open your eyes again in the hospital and i promise you that i will be the last person you see when you close them again.
i liy right next to you in hospital bed as you sing that hushed tone luliby as you take your very few last breath.
as god reached for your hand and pulls you up you and god both promise me that you will be waiting for me when its my time to go to.
and i promise my self i will reach al my goals and carrie on my life as i promised you i would.
R.I.P. aunt pam, both grandmas both grandpas, my brother. and get better uncle tony we miss you!!!!
A contest entry
- RIP Grandpa... I still love you!!!! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended November 4, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Thanks for your entry. You did very well, keep up your great work! Good luck in my contest
crimsonViper -
That you will keep your goals in life and make your family proud, good family poem.



