"i really wouldnt move if i were you."
move? i cant even breathe.
outside the trees are confused.
turn and turn,
turning back, pushing away
i would rather be abused
than ignored.
hear my silent cries?
love me or hate me,
i want you to need me.
insane,
struggling against your rage.
i have no power.
i cant move,
cant even breathe.
A contest entry
- Columbine Tribute Contest (Closes on 4/20/09) -- Lots of Options!!! --- Open to Prewrites by ZachP.
13800 points, ended May 24, 35 entries
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This is wondeful (but in a dark way). Amazing job!
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very powerful write! I really like this piece
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powerful on many different levels.
I read this two different ways... both of them equally powerful and equally pertinent.
Wow...
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all i can say is wow .. just wow.
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i freakin love this lass...
...id rather be abused then ignored..
Walt Whitman gypsy....
your a smash!
LOWELL POE
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