Weary eyes stare into a broken glass mirror.
She starts to see herself as dawn makes the paleness clearer
Sometimes things look better in the candlelight
That didn't help when I caught you red handed last night
Not able to say why you feel a certain way
Love drenched letters I have read
The love letters have ceased
The roses are deceased
Hope is a strict belief
That positive energy will bring relief
The strongest wind gone and blown.
The greatest love left alone
Author notes
A jumble of lines from different poem I have written. It seemed to go together.
A contest entry
- Your Best Lines by Danna Hobart.
390 points, ended October 19, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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Yes, these do fit together nicely. You would never even know they are from more than one poem. Thanks so much for entering.
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