destiny awaits....
met beneath ebony skies of peace,
compassion touched with promise
as hearts beat in starlit rhythm;
love spoken silently under astral glow
Author notes
Prompt:
midnight rendezvous
5 lines of wonder
A contest entry
- 5 Lines Of Wonder by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 17, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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twinkling stars and beating hearts a great combination for love to blossom in the evening glow.
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love, love, this piece
your words are so sweet.
my favorite so far. great job...
good luck in the contest.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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TERRIFIC
This is a short but terrific piece of romantic poetry. -
This is a wonderful piece of poetry you have written.
Rich in vivid color and taste
I like "as hearts beat in starlit rhythm"A most beautful penning indeed.
Tony
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Definitely 5 lines of wonder! Wow! I love this one. It says so much! Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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