If I could Id be mad at you...
Id be angry that you left me...
left me to once again face the world alone...
and it continues....
The kisses between the two of us grew heavier...this is the part of the old movies where they cut to waves crashing or a sky full of fireworks...the part where parents cover their children's eyes and the lovers draw closer to one another...this is the part of the movie where the female lead realizes this is prince charming that man of her dreams...
and for me...it was when I realized that I was no longer alone and that I finally meant something to someone...I had only known you a few hours and I already loved you...and as those words escaped my lips and I layed my head on your bare chest...there was no turning back...
The future so tragic as love is ripped from your heart and shattered
among the glass of broken windows from which sun used to shine.
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This is my favorite from my old account it was written a pretty long time ago.
What did you think
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nice poem it really moved me
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Thank you
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i could have cried, which is good your words moved me . simple, effective and real
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aw thanks so much
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i like this i really felt it
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awesome
Thanks for your comment. I love this..you have a way of making the reader feel the emotion. I especially like the first line."if i could be mad at you"...thanks for sharing!!!
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