it always seems that you
can peel my mask away
and crawl inside to comfort me
i'm wearing your soccer jersey
it's as green as the last
moment you wore it
and now i blend in
with the grass.
burn me tonight
under ten stacked blankets
under the blackness of the sky
and yet, nights still turn to days
though twilight will forever seem
to sit atop and reign supreme
whatever
you are doing
is the most beautiful thing.
come touch the stardust with me
let it stain your fingers glitter
to the music of our two hearts beating
we danced the tangelo tango
you in your citron shirt, me in a smile
we shared our sweet orange kisses.
A contest entry
- Your Best Lines by Danna Hobart.
390 points, ended October 19, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You have some really good lines in this.
come touch the stardust with me
let it stain your fingers glitter
This one in particular, I think is an extremely beautiful image. Thank you for entering. -
Ahhhhhh ...long sigh
I decided to read the competition to get a feel of what's being entered in this contest and WOW! Makes my entry seem so , well for lack of a better word... ameture. This felt deep and well thought out. Warmly, Chrissy
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wonderful
That was Beautiful! I cannot find a negative thing to say about it. well done!
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