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Feeling Joy

 
 
A smile
A frown turned up
instead of down, very
contagious, it spreads from me to
you.  Lips turned up, open or closed, once it
starts, it can turn to much laughter.
Share it across the air,
Feeling good with
a smile.


A Hug
Arms wrapped about
one another. Hugs give
comfort, share joy, and celebrate.
life. Usually given with a few pats
on the back and a smile. Lightly
given, or deep bear hugs
Everyone loves
a hug!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • serenity silvermoon
    January 4

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    very nice poem here to mom you have such great tallents keep it up your poem brought a smile to my face and a hug to my arms keep writing


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    awww, lovely poem
    thanks so much for sharing the smiles, and joy, good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    THESE ARE THE VERY BEST!!!

    The smiles and hugs others give to us work miracles and lifts our sagging hearts.


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    You have captured Hug and Smile very nicely in the delightful Rictameters. Write On!

    Dennis


  • Samplette gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    Hugs and smiles go arm in arm..very nicely crafted Rictameters, an enjoyable read. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam

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