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My Secret

Go away, you silly boy
You’re wasting your time
Quit your incessant whining
It won’t change my mind

You thought you got away for free
I hope you realize you were wrong
Just shut up and leave me alone
Quit crying, you said you were strong

[[And secretly I whisper,
“You know I love you so.”
Silently, I’m screaming
“Please, my love, don’t go”]]

All the pain you caused me,
And now you dare to frown?
You ripped my heart to pieces
Turned my world upside down

Don’t cry to me, I no longer care
You can do whatever you desire
I’d rather stay in this stupid pot
Than jump back in that fire

[[And secretly I whisper,
“You know I love you so.”
Silently, I’m screaming
“Please, my love, don’t go”]]

The love we shared, we share no more
I don't even know who you are
Never again will I re-open this wound
It's time to accept the scar

[[And secretly I whisper,
“You know I love you so.”
Silently, I’m screaming
“Please, my love, don’t go”]]

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Option 2: Write a poem telling someone just how much you miss them.

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  • psychedelicmatthew
    December 17, 2008

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    And I'm Emo?

    I enjoyed it. Made me nostalgic, and your metaphoric yet forthright language really conveyed alot. I liked it. 3...uh...things.
    Yeah
    ~Matt~


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this. I think I've been in this relationship too.........lolThanks for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles