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dissonant symphony.

I sing my heart out
      -with melodies from A to Z.

faltering,
so the dissonance overpowers
and I trip;

catching my music
      -in my throat
where you cannot hear it.

Author notes

♥ prompt- "I dance in the darkness because then you can't see me trip and fall."~Me

30 words on the dot haha.

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  • aanika
    October 14, 2008

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    mmmm I love the form.
    (the mmm was me enjoying your writing)
    I also love the background.
    and the power of the poem
    it's one of my favorites by you


  • written-in-ink
    October 11, 2008
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    i though that you did a good job with it

    loved every little bit
    <3


  • Hope Angel silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    I like your take on this. It's creative. Thank you for entering