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Lucid Transparency

Lucidly dreaming
pale skin sleeping
Without the transparency
Not clearly visible
To the outside world
Shining through
but so unclear...

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    good take on the prompt. this was an interesting write, i enjoyed reading it. i liked the ending a lot. the last few lines were very well written. beautiful piece.

    thanks for entering and goodluck