I wish I was beautiful
like a model
with long legs
and flawless skin
if I was beautiful
I’d get ALL the girls
and I wouldn’t be such an outcast
hated by everyone
because I’m so different
I wish I was you
[girl in the pic]
with long red hair
and bloodied eyes
if I was you
I’d get all the attention
I would BE the outcast
cast out from everyone
and it would be okay
I wish I was a mommy
[just like my sissy]
having a little baby
because they make me SO happy
if I was a mommy
that’d make it all okay
I’d be happy all the time
instead of
only none of the time
I wish I was ME
[if I knew who ME was]
because then I wouldn’t be
just a little soulless puppet
ready for others’ manipulation
if I was me
the real me, I mean
everything would get better
but I’m not so sure
than there’s a real me left
after all I’ve done
to kill her
Author notes
Dirty and Broken
i chose the first pic you gave me, the one with the red haired faery....
i want to be your....pet! totally, i want to be your pet!!! or sex slave...that would work too...
A contest entry
- Wanted: More AP family members by Iridessa MoonFlower.
600 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sorry, okay sex slave ha? That is fine, your got it! Sorry about that, I really like this poem too! ~~Iridessa~~
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SCORE!
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This poem is so pretty, my favorite lines are
"I wish I was a mommy
[just like my sissy]
having a little baby
because they make me SO happy"
Its cute! good job hun!
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thanks hon
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Wonderfully Written My Friend !
It think that you should not be so hard on yourself, for we all go through our good days , even if we feel that most of them are bad, that is in our own opinion , is what i am speking about . I really love the way that you have written this poem ! One with pure hard core Honesty, But I do not believe that all of our days are bad, Instead we really think that they are! I also believe that we must all get dressed up and go out once in a while, for the old saying" We Must Fake It Until We Make It Is Oh So True " For sometimes we do not feel like even coming out of our room !!!!!!!Personaly I feel that alot of models are not very pretty at all, And as far as being flawless, they are just hidden in or on most models. Being a mom is not the way, To have true happiness, for we first have to ( LEARN TO ) like ourselfs at least a little first. And then yes a child can make you feel even more needed, loved, As well as wanted ! and you are you for you have written this ,As well as decribed it in detail so very well.... And remember you do not need to let others manipulate for you know what you want more than anyone else, Sometimes we have to just start all over , Learning to LOVE ourself's !!!!!!! And as far as a real me left I know that " SHE IS IN THERE, YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND HER AND LET HER OUT ! " Good Luck In This Contest. And remember to choose , ( Whom You Would Like To Be In Her AP Family ! ) In Your Author Note's !!!!!!! For you are someone, and I am sure that others can see you for whom you really are !!!! Blessings be To you Always !!! Brenda Gae
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wow...that was a very very long comment
but i did read it all
thank you
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...Please don't think that a baby would make you happy...At least not right now. I WISH WISH WISH I could have had her a few years down the road and maybe not struggle so much. It's quite a fit to be a young mother. I'm happy because I'm embracing it...But I was scared shitless, and am still scared that maybe I won't be the best mother...
And you are beautiful...I wish I could have had more time with you on Sunday.
Seriously, do something for me. PLEASE. I'm asking for me and for the baby (maybe that will be some incentive) lol
At least ONCE a week (YES) put on some non non-conformist (yes, that's right...borderline what you call 'preppy') clothing, a dab of make-up and throw some curlers in your hair, or, even straighten it. Throw your smile around and flirt a bit. See how it makes your day go.
I'm serious. I would like you to take pictures as well. One in the morning and one at night when you get home, and write about how you felt that day on AP/storywrite, whatever.
Just do it for me, it's just once a week, and what could it hurt???
I LOVE YOU!!!
Message me later, please.
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i know that a baby would not make things better right now
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You would not be a bad mother. It's just not the correct time to have a child right now.
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i would be though and i know it
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Nah, you know I was just telling Sage today how much she would enjoy being around you, anyway. As much as you like to read. :3 We're currently reading 'A Confederacy of Dunces'. I'm proud to have you as a sister and Aunt to my child.
*huggles tight* I wish you would accept what a beautiful and amazing person you are, Cassie.
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um..for what?
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on myspace <3
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wish I was ME
[if I knew who ME was]
because then I wouldn’t be
just a little soulless puppet
ready for others’ manipulation
if I was me
the real me, I mean
everything would get better
but I’m not so sure
than there’s a real me left
after all I’ve done
to kill her
i simply adore this poem doll !!!!
so great this part really stuck out to me becasue thats how i'v been feeling here these few weeks amazing work love much,
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thanks, hon
your comment makes e smile
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So tell me which ap family member do you want to be? Thank you for entering &
good luck... but please answer the question above.. ~~Iridessa~~
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ha!
i knew i'd entered!
twasn't what you wanted...but i entered, nonetheless.... -
i put my choice in me AN, kay?
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