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Moonlight

Amazing moonlight compels me
Pale luminescent glowing
Twinkling stars surrounding
Chilly night air blows my face
Silence is golden before dawn

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5 lines of poetry

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    how refreshing a midnight walk can be, and though the sky seems silent it can create a sense of heightened awareness that often inspires us to write.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    great job,
    i really enjoyed your ending,
    it pulled the whole piece together so well
    Good luck in the contest.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce