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Hidden among the Dust.






Darkened rooms devoid of light,
Conceal the faded drawings of past.

As lovers hands tightly bound,
Sketch their fate...
             
                    ...Forever.









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Prompt; Pencil

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  • Sunkissed xo
    November 15, 2008

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    How beautiful. Your divine words and expression in this poem moves my heart and soul; there is a heat and passion in this poem! Well done on a fabulous write. Thanks so much for entering my contest
    peace ♥


  • leander Moderators member
    November 4, 2008

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    This poem has quite a serene feel to it in some way, and I like that.
    Thank you for entering the contest!
    Leander


  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    you wrote this so well on the prompt! i loved all the imagery. it was beautiful. i loved the last couple lines.
    good job in the contest


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 6, 2008

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    Oooh, nicely penned ! I like where you took this. Very well worded & I love how you portrayed the word. Thank you for entering & best of luck ! ♥