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Or Give Me Death

Permanently bound,
tied and scarred,
she races into the dark,
unafraid of what she may find
lurking beyond the shadows.

After all,
she's already marked.

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10.05.08
Vaughn.

Prompt:
Tattoo.

A contest entry

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  • Rclane gold member
    October 14, 2008
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    Short and powerful....I like. congrats on the HM


  • Alive4aLiving
    October 9, 2008

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    Very very nice! I like this a lot, a new and definitely original view of tatoo's in poetry, I like it a lot!


  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    ooh this was a good write for the prompt. the imagery was great. and the last two lines were brilliant and really hit hard.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 6, 2008

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    Oooh ! I loved this ! Very good take on the prompt. Actually, extraordinary. Thank you for entering & best of luck ! ♥


  • Harlequin Dance
    October 5, 2008
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    Hmmm...nice. It flows very well, and the last two lines have a nice impact.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 5, 2008
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    your word inspiration is:

    tattoo.

    take it where you want

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