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Midnight Haiku

Moonlight kisses blow,
Crickets chirp night lullabies,
Peace and silence reins

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  • patrick bittel
    November 23, 2009
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    good

    i like haikus but im not 2 good at them!!


  • BB-Rabbit
    October 26, 2008
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    Thank you. And no, we're not learning haikus at school.


  • The Fun House gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    This is a really lovely poem. I have never been able to write haiku’s I doubt I would get anywhere near this myself its lovely well done. Are you leaning to write them at school too?


  • owlish
    October 5, 2008

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    This is great for a first haiku! (Plus we'll have to do one in Mrs. White's class soon). I'd get rid of the punctuation though. Goes well with the background, makes a really pretty picture in my head. Great job!

  • BB-Rabbit
    October 5, 2008
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    I hope you like my first haiku!

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