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[mmm]

sensual aroma filling the air –
wanting to be caressed with sweet pleasure.
I’m lying in a strawberry field –
Drown by your dark syrup of love.

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..::like I said, I gave it a try::..
Enjoy! :]

(( Word : Chocolate ))
[mmmm] ~hehe~
*Exactly 25 words*

A contest entry

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  • alandriel1138
    October 14, 2008
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    awesome. no wonder you won gold. you did a great job.


  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    wow the imagery was amazing in this poem. it was a wonderful poem about chocolate haha
    great job on the gold!


    • Rock-Junkie
      October 9, 2008
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      lol glad you enjoyed reading it.
      and thanks! I was really not expecting it... :]


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 6, 2008

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    Well I definitely loveee where you went with this ! It was very well written, and your imagery was amazing. Thank you for entering & best of luck ! ♥


    • Rock-Junkie
      October 6, 2008
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      glad you enjoyed it.
      you are welcome! [like I said before] I like your contests =)


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 5, 2008
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    hahah

    :D
    your word inspiration is:

    chocolate.

    take it where you want :)
    ♥ 


    • Rock-Junkie
      October 5, 2008
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      hrm... I should try
      I like your contests. seem to keep my interest and muse working ~hehe~

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