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Using you

Pulling together
Putting pretty pictures
On the refrigerator
Pushing apart
repelling one another
Lost in a sea of
magnetic fields of glory
Using me, you..

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magnets

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    this was a great take on the prompt.
    Pushing apart
    repelling one another
    Lost in a sea of
    magnetic fields of glory
    ---
    i loved those lines.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 6, 2008

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    Interesting take on the prompt ! I liked this a lot. It was so well worded and just wow. Incredibly penned. Thanks for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 5, 2008
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    your word inspiration is:

    magnet(s).

    take it where you want
    ♥