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Dear Barbie:

Dear Barbie:

Thanks for giving girls false assumptions.
For making them think
they need to be perfect.
Blond hair. Blue eyes.
No thanks.

Sincerely,
me.

Author notes

Not sure how well that worked, but when I heard plastic, I thought Barbie, and that's about it.

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  • Phoenix Shadow
    November 25, 2008
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    awww, that's cute!!


  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    this was so creative and unique! i really liked how you were prompted by plastic to write this. that was amazing. and it's a very true poem as well.


  • Spiritual Soul
    October 5, 2008

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    haha I LOVE this, it's a great take on your word, very creative! Good luck!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • KayJay
    October 5, 2008

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    Well done! Your uniqueness is the beauty that should be strived for... more than that is not required. Excellent write Olivia!
    Ken


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 5, 2008

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    Wow, I really like where you took this ! I seriously laughed out loud when I saw the title; I never thought anyone would take the prompt all the way back to a barbie doll But I LOVE where you took this. Very well penned, and I love the relation. Thank you for entering & good luck ! 
    ♥
    Manduh


  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 5, 2008
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    your word to be inspired by shall beee:

    plastic.

    go with it where you please
    ♥

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