Painted streets
Colors all around
Little children dance
In the multicolored rain
Blue, purple, pink
Footprints on the pavement
A child’s imagination
Wanders
Through clouds
Author notes
Hope this is ok. I tried ^_^
A contest entry
- 15::25 Quickie♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
300 points, ended October 7, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ooh this is a great take on the prompt. the imagery was beautiful. i loved the first few lines. and i liked the line with 'multicolored rain' that was very unique and pretty.
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Awww, I really like where you took this ! The imagery was great, and the overall poem was good, too :] I love the image of "painted streets"; well phrased, and good structure of words. Thanks for entering & good luck !
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Manduh -
This is beautiful! It makes me think of rainbow chalk on the sidewalk, rain ruining the pictures and making the colors blend.
But that's just me.
Really, it's much more than ok. I loved it. +Good luck!
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your word for inspiration is:
polychrome.
go with it where you please♥
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