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Mothers love

Dear sweet little angel
This is my gift to you
Until you came into my life
I've never known a love so true

Blessed to have you grow within me
And I loved you even then
Now every time I see you
I fall in love again

You truly are amazing
As I watch you as you grow
The depth of my admiration
Is something you can't know

I'll always be beside you
To catch you when you fall
And if ever you should need me
Don't you hesitate to call

This bond cannot be broken
It's far too strong to break
Your name is imprinted on my heart
And that's something no one can take

My world feels whole now
As I hold you while you sleep
The smile while you're dreaming
Make my heart complete

Rain Marie I love you
No matter what path you may take
I'm always right there with you
This love no one can break

*~Abigail~*

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I wrote this for my daughter

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  • ea silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    a wonderful welcoming song of love to your darling daughter.


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    October 5, 2008

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    This is a beautiful tribute to your daughter. Your rhyme is always so flawless whenever I read your work, and it never fails to touch my heart. You say you are not as talented as I at writing, my dear, but I really need to disagree. You never fail to make my heart flutter with feelings that always touch me with your words.

    There really is nothing more touching than the bond between mother and child.


  • gothicchildren05
    October 5, 2008

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    awww, this is such a beautiful and wonderful piece.....I love it Abby. a Mother's Love is true and can never be broken....great write......