Sitting atop a snow
covered hill,
a glittering
castle awash
with white where
winter dreams spill!
Reindeer prance
proudly around
this winter
wonderland,
only a girl
and her mother
have found.
Happiness consumes
them as they drink
hot coca by the
fire, afterwards
skating on the
ice is their
desire!
The girl has never
seen her mom so
content, though
the air has an
icy chill their
admiration is
never bent.
Together they
gallop away
on reindeer
with jingling
bells, as
snow flakes
drift down
like a magical
spell!
In their castle
from the turrets
sparkles the
world like
a crystal,
the earth so
frozen but so
mystical!
The winter
castle...
Of fullfilled
wishes and dreams!
Author notes
(reindeer picture) courtesy of www.art.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Castles in the snow. by PoetryPuppy.
425 points, ended October 13, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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oh what a most wonderful dream like poem. Almost a true life fantasy. This really was magical, your words were lovely and the imagery so lovely it made it seem so very real. Excellent writing. Well done.
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thank you for your beautiful poem,Mummy will love this, love Kiarna
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Nice, NatureGirl! I'm entering the contest too...
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