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spring cleaning

my tattered window shades
allow a little light to shine

through faded prisms of my
lonely living room looks large

 

 

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    this had nice imagery, i enjoyed reading it. it was a unique take on the prompt and i liked how you wrote this. good take on the prompt.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    Let in the light I say
    Alone need not mean lonely I've found.

    Great write!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 5, 2008
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    Well I say throw out the lonely and go live


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    20 little words... big picture! wtg

    Juls


  • libithina
    October 5, 2008
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    and that little shining light is soo bright s

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