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The beginning of woman

Sweet face,
          Holds a gaze,

                  Virgin body,                 
              Womanhood crossed,

              She makes her stand,
              Shes against the world...

              Starting and creating...



                               


                               
                                           

Author notes

my perspective of this young woman is different...hope i inspired you and can be adored!

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  • Bbrraannddoonn
    April 16

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    i luvvvvvvvvv it babe and again im not trying to get points i jus wanto to tell u u did good (o)Y(o) sry bout tht i was jus seenin sumthin love u byee


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Soft and creative
    Lovely
    TY for entering!
    Lynda