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flowers in your hair

amber angels
long without sun
adorn their water wings

with tissue papered roses
dipped in unsoiled gardens

of baby's breath

 

 

A contest entry

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  • poet2angels gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    This is gorgeous
    I love the metaphor, imagery and softness of sweet words...

    Sigh~

    Lynda


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Aww... that is gorgeous and such precious imagery!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 5, 2008

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    Very pretty thoughts here C


  • sunoir
    October 5, 2008

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    wow

    I didn't even know this piece was in a contest of sighs until I scrolled down. Sigh I did, just beautiful.


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    awww, well ya made me *sigh*

    Juls

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