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To a Knight

 

 

 

 

            I really hope

   someOne arrives with help.

 

I'm fighting back

 with a dimming flashlight.

 

      By glimmering back I'll know it's You.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    I can't see much of a connection to the prompt, however this was an interesting and creative entry, thank you.


  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    i loved the last line!! it was a great take on the prompt. and the imagery was amazingly written.
    goodluck in the contest


  • going nowhere
    October 5, 2008
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    this reminded me of flashlight tag.. just played that a few weekends ago... but i know that isn't what this is about.
    in the darkness of this world, i hope my batteries won't go dead... and i know someOne's never will. great write. hope it does well for you.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    now this is different, whish makes it stand out, which is a good thing. Great job.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce