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Kisses and Hot Cocoa

I crept down the squeaky stairs,
for hot cocoa and few chocolate chips.
Only to find you sitting in the chair,
sweet kisses in between the sips…       
Off to bed, snuggle close to me dear.

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Prompt: midnight rendezvous

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    very touching piece, what joy it would be to share a kiss and some hot cocoa with somone dear.

  • sidereal silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    aww this was so cute!!
    great take on the prompt. this was an interesting piece to read i liked it.
    goodluck in the contest

  • Lola Lola
    October 7, 2008

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    very nice!! (but maybe "chip" should be "chips"? it would flow better. but i miss hot cocoa. its too hot down here =)


  • lefthanded
    October 7, 2008
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    I get ideas!

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    Now this is simply lovely.
    I enjoyed this a lot.
    I found it to be very sweet
    Good luck in the contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

  • docbill gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Tasty

    My favorite combination! Very good work!

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