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Apologetic moron

I was so mean
So harsh so cruel
Randomly, without reason
That is why i am a fool

You say you are no longer mad
But i can tell
Your still upset
I didn't catch you when you fell

My own mistake
My own stupidity
I miss how you
Fill my mind with sensitivity

Im such an ass
I am the worst
I miss you
For your kindness I intencily thirst

Will I ever
Be forgiven
Or will I miss you
As long as I'm living

Author notes

This is about a wonderful friend I never did deserve. She's one of those once in a lifetime friends...I used up my one chance.

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  • ms-cuddles silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Sometimes we are our own worst enemies. Mistakes are made and true friends forgive once we own up to what we've done and how sorry we are. Thanks for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles