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Hope

Missing image
Purity and goodwill
Surround the angel;
deep inside
A gift to us
from heaven
In perfect harmony
we shall reside

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No credit for pic given not my own

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  • chilali
    October 6, 2008

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    *Sigh* Hahaha! Wow. It did make me sigh. This was amazing. Beautiful rhymes over here and the picture is so pretty! They go together perfectly. Well done Boog!


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    So pretty with lovely subtle rhyme...
    Lovely!
    TY for entering



    Lynda


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    October 5, 2008

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    Nicely done. Short and sweet. I like this this alot. It goes very well with the picture. Great job Boog.

    Mike


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Beautiful !

    So few words but saying so much Another great piece of poetry Boog


  • smonte19124 gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    beautiful words for a beautiful picture. Well Done!


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    October 5, 2008
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    there is comfort here


  • Riamh
    October 5, 2008
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    Boog, this is beautiful. Well penned, Sir.
    Be well
    Slayer

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