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Transparant Fallacy

Second chance;

for my happily
              ever after

Undeniable happiness
is forever;

A translucent heart;
can never beat on its own

Author notes

Prompt: Translucent

Struggled with this prompt; my muse is sleepy too

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    this was a great write! i loved your take on the prompt. this was written with such emotion and beautiful imagery. i loved it. i liked the last two lines a lot. they were a very powerful ending to this write.

    thanks for entering and goodluck