we are somewhere
between
l & e
because the journey
into midnight
wraps silver strands
of syllables
in forever's
circle
In a list
- The other 4 letter word (Love) • next in list
- Beautiful Words by Beautiful People I Know • next in list
A contest entry
- Make Me Sigh In 20 Words by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 5, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love decoding your poems. You as always leave puzzles behind when you write.
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I am vowing to myself never to miss a poem you write again...ever.
If I break that vow,
you can deprive me of ever drinking lemonade again.
Or not, I don't drink lemonade that often anyways.
All those letters...I am wondering what they stand for, but I think I get the sentiment.
"because the journey
into midnight"
If I was the sighing type,
this would be more than worthy.
'because' is not a word I fancy much in poems,
but this is the coolest instance of it I've ever seen.!
Jessica
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Now this is a beautifully done metaphor. The overall tone of the piece is set well in the first few lines and from there it flows like a dream. I really enjoyed this and can see how it took Gold
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Congratulations on the Golden Chalice!!!
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Beautiful...
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Oooo... that is good
grats
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Oh Wow!
that was Very!
Congratulations!
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omg
When will I ever learn to stop asking you for a sigh...
My God it takes forever to catch my breath...It just takes off with my heart and keeps going
Big sighs and tears
My way of applaudding excellence
Lynda
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This made me sigh...beautifully penned. Whispering soft...a pleasure to read. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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yes.
m
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A very beautiful and slowly worded write. By that I mean, it is spoken with a careful, beautiful voice. An extremely beautiful write. I applaud the brilliance and clarity of this piece.
Adsaige -
beautiful
Well done indeed. A wonderful write for the pic very fitting. Best of luck to you in this contest and i all of life, Boog
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