mysterious reflection
masking the true thoughts
of a frightened girl,
-her ribcage was cluttered with scrap-paper memories
and a barely-beating heart.
what kind of weed-covered meadow
holds the key to inspiration anyways?
-a quick fix would be enough to get the thoughts flowing
hiding behind echoes is never the answer.
Author notes
50 words.
PhotoCredit: Dark Reflection by `larafa
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just a question.. so i did a word count on word and it's 50 words.. but i think it counted the words with a dash as 1 word which hopefully isn't a problem :S
cause I know some people count words with dashes as 2 words.
I can always edit if it needs it 
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A contest entry
- 20::50♥ Quickie =) by innocence jaded.xx.
300 points, ended October 21, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nahh, I'll let it slide. It can count as one word, haha, I don't really care.
Onto your poem:
Wow. Definitely one of the most powerful ones I've gotten. I love where you took that picture, and how you portrayed it so brilliantly & wonderfully. Incredible, and so creatively penned.
--her ribcage was cluttered with scrap-paper memories
and a barely-beating heart.
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definitely my favorrrrite :] I love the whole idea of "scrap-paper memories"; beautiful.
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i liiiiike.
i think the dash words are two words but that's just how I would count.
love the last line
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