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Pipe Dream

In dreams, angels perch
on fiery columns of marble
to judge each in pairs,
as clouds dissapate to ash
to crumble on the seabed.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    "columns" not "colunms" minor typo but this is a lovely yet slightly abstract take on the prompt that evokes some rather deep yet soothing thoughts.


  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    wow this was great. i really liked the title and the imagery was beautiful. i loved the ending
    goodluck in the contest


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    i can see some deep emotions within this
    Very enjyable to read, nicely penned piece
    of poetry.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce