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Stars Are Falling All For Us.

The kerosene lamp flickered
as I inhaled
each beat of my heart

my susceptibilities
were luminous;

I was in

love.

♥

Author notes

loveyouuu♥

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sweet love? by ~cisya

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    this was beautiful. the iamgery was amazing and i really liked the title. (your guardian angel lyrics?) great take on the prompt. overall a very emotional and imagery filled write.

    thanks for entering and goodluck

  • The Rainbows Mind
    October 5, 2008
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    It was good, don't have much to say about it, but I like to comment on everything I read.