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is gone -GOLD




There's nothing to remember
in the hollow
of my throat,

only once blued eyes
and

kaleidoscope thoughts

that keep

surging.







Author notes

twenty words
translucent

Always want to play but you never want to lose

A contest entry

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  • carole21
    October 9, 2008
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    nicely done . . congrats on the gold !!


  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    i loved this write. this was amazing. the imagery was beautiful and your take on the prompt was fantastic. i loved everything about this write.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • Poesing
    October 7, 2008
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    So sad in such a few words. Excellent write.


  • sheltered
    October 5, 2008
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    this left a lump in my throat


  • charcoal
    October 5, 2008
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    is beautiful.

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