trucks and buses scowl,
tell me to go away.
bricks rattle,trying to throw me out
i think i got the message,
going to leave pretty soon.
A contest entry
- 5 Lines Of Wonder by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 17, 2008, 30 entries
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sometimes the night can seem to be a place that we are unwelcome to venture into, most often that is our healthy sense of self preservation at work. good job to convey this.
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nice write. i like the third line; it had some nice imagery. goodluck in the contest
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thanx
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" i think i got the message,
going to leave pretty soon."
Very nice write, good luck in the contest
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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